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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Writing a wedding noticatification/ invitation to my bosses

Here is what i have written as wedding notification/invitation to my bosses. Kindly help me assess if its okay.

Dear Management;
I hope this finds you in good health. I am writing to notify you that on the 23rd of july, i will be walking down the aisle with Bryan.

Am therefore so much honoured and delightful to invite my Bimsoft and Ubongosoft families to celebrate with me on one of the greatest milestone of my life.

Cheers.
  

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Maybe you can work with this: Dear Management Team, I hope this finds you in good health. I am writing to notify you of a joyous event that will take place in my life on the 23rd of July. I will be walking down the aisle with Bryan.

  • Maybe you can work with this: Dear Management Team, I hope this finds you in good health.
  • I am writing to notify you of a joyous event that will take place in my life on the 23rd of July.
  • I will be walking down the aisle with Bryan.
  • It is an honour and delight for me to invite my Bimsoft and Ubongosoft families to celebrate the day of one of the greatest milestones of my life with me.
  • Bryan and I hope you will be able to share this momentous and exultant occasion with us.
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Maybe you can work with this:

Dear Management Team,

I hope this finds you in good health. I am writing to notify you of a joyous event that will take place in my life on the 23rd of July. I will be walking down the aisle with Bryan. It is an honour and delight for me to invite my Bimsoft and Ubongosoft families to celebrate the day of one of the greatest milestones of my life

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