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Nshuzn Posted 4 years ago
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Writing a "thank you" note to our customers. Please help me fix this sentence.

As I said in the title, I am writing a note to all of our customers asking them to review us and also spread a word about us to their friends and family.

If you found the product to be on-par with your expectations we’d be thrilled if you could leave us a review on our facebook page.

Also, as a small business, we rely greatly on word-on-mouth from customers such as you so please spread a word about us to your friends and family.

Are these sentences correct?

  

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nshuzn If you found the product to be o n p ar with your expectation s, we’d be thrilled if you could leave us a review on our F acebook page. Also, as a small business, we rely greatly on word- of -mouth ratings from valued customers such as yo u, so please spread a word about us to your friends and family.

  • nshuzn If you found the product to be o n p ar with your expectation s, we’d be thrilled if you could leave us a review on our F acebook page.
  • Also, as a small business, we rely greatly on word- of -mouth ratings from valued customers such as yo u, so please spread a word about us to your friends and family.
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nshuznIf you found the product to be on par with your expectations, we’d be thrilled if you could leave us a review on our Facebook page. Also, as a small business, we rely greatly on word-of-mouth

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