Writing a statement of Purpose letter dont know how to end it???

This is a rough draft. i appericate if you kindly explain what i can do to make it better or if i have any corrections i need to fix. its not finish, im not sure how to end it.



If you can imagine it, you can achieve it.

If you can dream it, you can become it.

--William Arthur Ward

Watching NCIS over the past few years I long to follow in Abby’s footsteps as a Forensic Specialist. I would imagine myself on the crime scene looking for fingerprints, blood samples, identifying a dead body, and just helping to solve a crime. This quote by William Ward is just not any quote but one that can make you successive in the future. This quote is very important to me because if I keep visualizing myself as a Forensic Specialist I’ll get closer to achieving more of my dream and becoming successful in the future.

It did not take me long to realize that this is what I really wanted to do. The day my dog passed away from an unknown death, I find myself interested and wanting to find and solve solutions to problems that happen when dealing with someone’s unfortunate and unexplained death. However, it was only recently that I have paid close attention to what it is that I would have to do to be prepared and successful in this field. When I realized that being a forensic specialist entitled being on top of the case, seeing some stomach turning scenes, taking the situation serious, and even working crazy hours, I knew it was what I should be chasing to become. I’ve been known to always wondered what causes an death, why that chemical caused that person to die, or even why people do such things for killing a person. In this field I know it would answer my questions, for instance, using Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System (IAFIS) to find a match to the finger prints they find at the scene, and what evidence and how long they got to proven the suspect is guilty.

Solving problems have really been a part of my everyday life. In addition, my school life with learning, my activities what I can do to get better, and even a day at home with why something isn’t working or why it broke. The qualities I need to take to be successful in life are trustworthy and preparation. I say preparation because I need to be prepared for whatever they throw at me, even if I do it wrong I will know next time what it is I need to do to make it right. Trustworthy because I need everyone around me to help me get closer to my dream. What I mean by that is I need to be able to trust and depend on the workers I work with to get things done. We all cant do stuff on our own.

The Department of Forensic Sciences at The George Washington University

provides an opportunity for me to achieve the goals I expect be able to complete at your college. The Department of Forensic Sciences has a Microscope Lab which contains numerous microscopes and other instruments for trace evidence analysis and airborne

examinations among other techniques and it would be an ideal supplement to my attended studies with the courses I selected from the wide range of course options.....