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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Writing a song...

Hi I'm struggling with one line of my song and was wondering if you could help. The line goes:

'Is a lack of hope and high stolidity enough to justify a breakdown in society?'

I'm not sure if I've used the word 'stolidity' correctly. Can you help?

Thanks.
  

Top answer

Hi, Seems fine to me. Is it a rap song? It seems to have that rhythm.

— Clive

  • Hi, Seems fine to me.
  • Is it a rap song?
  • It seems to have that rhythm.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Seems fine to me.

Is it a rap song? It seems to have that rhythm.

Clive
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It's my own take on folk. A kind of jazz folk. It's was whether or not to have high infront of stolidity that I was struggling with.
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Hi,

It's an uncommon phrase, but that is not an unusual thing in a song, and probably a good idea!

Clive
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