Writing a prayer?

It's about parents that wish the best for those who are expecting theirs. Please let me know if I have any mistakes?

"Lord,

You have showered us from your endless love and with your grace you've given us ten treasures, ten children of love.

Please Lord, have mercy on all of those who are expecting everywhere around the world.

Bless them with your blessing.

Bless them with the blessing of love. Amen.