Is this sentence OK? and is the WHETHER part ok, can you use WHETHER like this?
I am writing you as I am looking for a position in a modeling agency, whether a booking position or an other position consisting of updates/updating for your internet site, editing pictures, etc which is what I was hired to do previously at a another modeling agency in LA.
Thank you
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, which is what I was doing previously at another modeling agency in Los Angeles .
— Mister Micawber
, which is what I was doing previously at another modeling agency in Los Angeles .
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I am writing you as I am looking for a position in a modeling agency, either a booking position or a position consisting of updating your internet site, editing pictures, etc., which is what I was doing previously at another modeling agency in Los Angeles.
1 Whether a secreterial job or a blue collar job, I'll turn the offer down. 2 Whether black or red, I'll have to say no to those colors.
Why can't you use WHETHER in my above sentence but EITHER.-- Because 'whether' suggests a carelessness that is very inappropriate to a letter seeking employment!