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Emily You Posted 13 years ago
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writing a letter to university

Dear sir/Madam

I would like to request more information about admission requirements.

I am a form 6 student schooling in Fiji who are planning to apply for admission to SAIT (Southern Alberta Institution of Technology) in October in this year. I desire to study Energy Asset Management at the university and I would like to inquire about details on documents required for the entrance.

In the website, it is indicated that:
• Original official high school transcript (last three years) and postsecondary transcripts (if applicable)
• Original English translation of transcripts (notarized or certified translations)
• Original diploma /degree (Graduation Certificate) and the English translation
• English language proficiency results for direct entry (IELTS Academic, TOEFL Internet Based, CLBA, CAEL)
• Any other documents that are part of the admissions requirements for a specific program
Concerning the last bullet point, it is quite unclear that which specific programs require any other documents so I would be appreciated if you specify that. Also I would like to know if Energy Asset Management program are included as one of the programs.

Thank you for your kind consideration and I look forward to receive your response.

Yours faithfully
Yeeun You

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Hello Yeeun; Welcome to English Forums! Here are some corrections for your letter. Dear S ir/Madam I would like to request more information about your admission requirements.

  • Hello Yeeun; Welcome to English Forums!
  • Here are some corrections for your letter.
  • Dear S ir/Madam I would like to request more information about your admission requirements.
  • ) studying schooling in Fiji who is planning to apply for admission to SAIT (Southern Alberta Institution of Technology) in October in this year.
  • I desire to study Energy Asset Management at the university and I would like to inquire about some details on the documents required for the entrance .
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Hello Yeeun;
Welcome to English Forums! Here are some corrections for your letter.

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to request more information about your admission requirements.

I am a form 6 student (You might have to explain what a Form 6 student is.) studying schooling in Fiji who is planning to apply for admission to SA
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