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Can you help me to correct my essay ( grammatical point and using English point), please? If you have another way to express ideas clearer, please note it. Thanks in advance for the help.

Subject: You are following a course in a school. Recently, you feel the course is not suitable for you. You want to change the course. Write a letter to the principal of the school telling him why you are unhappy with the course and ask for his help. Give reasons to support your wish. (150 words)

Mr. Willans,

I am currently a student in the scientifical department. I am writing to bring your attention to my discontent with my maths course and request your help to get an issue.

Last month, I chose the maths course's level advance of professor Diana. After the second class, I have felt uncomfortable so far about many points such as sentences of lessons, organization system, etc. Especially, I was doubt about the sentences of lessons which did not differ from the medium level which I had studied two years ago. My supposition gets more strong when I passed my first test last week. The exam resembled exactly the medium level's test. I would have a good rate but I have also been upset because I could not have a coherent level to enrich the knowledge. That's why I would like to request your help for this complicated situation.

Sincerely,

Your student.

Ha Thi Hoang Linh · Accepted Answer

Could you correct grammatical point and using English, please? If you have another way to express ideas clearer, please note it that. Thanks in advance your help.

Subject: You are following a course in a school. Recently, you feel the course is not suitable for you. You want to change the course. Write a letter to the principal of the school telling him why you are unhappy with the course and ask for his help. Give reasons to support your wish. (150 words)

Mr. Dillan,

I am currently a student in the scientifical department. I am writing to bring your attention to my discontent with the maths course of professor Diana and request your help to get an issue.

Last month, I chose the maths course's advanced level. Since the second class, I have felt uncomfortable about many points such as sentences of lessons, the organization of class, etc. Especially, I was doubt about the sentence of lessons because it resembled the medium level's lessons which I had studied last year. My supposition was strongly confirmed through my latest exam in a few days ago. The test did not differ from the medium level's one. Honestly, I would have a good rate but I bothered of it because the course isn't really useful and don't enrich my knowledge. As a fourth year student, my time in school is running out so I really need the courses which are able to give me more tools than this one for my seeking a job. That's why I need your help as well as your permission to change the course.

Sincerely,

Your student.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Could you correct grammatical point and using English, please? If you have another way to express ideas clearer, please note it that. Thanks in advance your help.

Subject: You are following a course in a school. Recently, you feel the course is not suitable for you. You want to change the course. Write a letter to the principal of the school telling him why you are unhappy with the course and ask for his help. Give reasons to support your wish. (150 words)

Mr. Dillan,

I am currently a student in the scientifical (Not a valid word. Also, if you are in high school, there are no separate departments. That applies to colleges and universities.) department. I am writing to bring your attention to my discontent with the maths course of professor Diana (Are you on a first name basis with your maths teacher?) and request your help to get an issue. (What issue do you want? Most people do not want trouble for themselves.)

Last month, I chose the ~~maths course's~~ advanced level course in mathematics. Since the second class, I have felt uncomfortable about many points such as sentences (wrong word) of lessons, the organization of class, etc. (Do not use "etc." or "..." or "and so on." Complete your thought.) Especially, I was doubt (wrong word) about the sentence (A sentence is a grammatical term. ) of lessons because it resembled the medium level's lessons which I had studied last year. My supposition was strongly confirmed through my latest exam in a few days ago. The test did not differ from the medium level's one. Honestly, I would have a good rate (wrong word) but I bothered of it (wrong usage) because the course isn't really useful and don't (wrong form) enrich my knowledge. As a fourth year student, my time in school is running out so I really need the courses which are able to give me more tools than this one for my seeking a job. That's why I need your help as well as your permission to change the course.

(You really need to specify which course you want to be in, and also how you will catch up with the other students.)

Sincerely,

Your student.

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