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Tung Quoc Posted 20 years ago
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The government demanded each ministry and sector should actively announce trade conditions based on business laws and put forward effective measures to stimulate the demand of investment and consumption as well as to push the people into spending to boost commodity consumption.The government will hold a nationwide conference to discuss solutions to solve difficulties in investment development.

Prime Minister A emphasized the lessons of announcing and general power from the 2 programmes of socio-economic development in communes sharing difficulties and anti-poverty.Prime Minister required that the two programmes should be well carried out.Especially, he advised that the sectors of finance,banking and customs should try their best to reform to support enterprises.

1/Is it obligatory to write the before trade conditions,commodity consumption,solutions, Prime Minister, Prime Minister A and difficulties?Why?

2/Do you write effective or efficient here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?

3/Do you write announcing or announcement here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?

4/Do you write required or demanded here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?

5/Is sharing here correct?

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Please correct this paragraph and if possible, tell me why I am wrong.If I write a/b , that means both are possible and interchangeable in this context. Thanks

The government demanded/required each ministry and sector should actively announce trade conditions/the trade conditions based on business laws and put forward efficient/effective measures to stimulat

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