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Anonymous Posted 3 years ago
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1. He felt as if the disabled was stung by bees.

2. He is like the disabled being stung by bees.

Are the sentences meaningful and natural? Please correct the sentences.

  

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anonymous Are the sentences meaningful and natural? No. anonymous Please correct the sentences.

  • anonymous Are the sentences meaningful and natural?
  • No.
  • anonymous Please correct the sentences.
  • I do not know what you are trying to say.
  • All of us get stung by bees if we disturb their nest.
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anonymousAre the sentences meaningful and natural?

No.

anonymousPlease correct the sentences.

I do not know what you are trying to say.

All of us get stung by bees if we disturb their nest. If a disabled person in a wheelchair knocks over a bee's nest, they will get stung.

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He felt like a whelk in a supernova?

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anonymousthe disabled

This is not good because you have not made it clear who this refers to.

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