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This is my essay about Quality Education. Please help me correct it.

“What makes a country become a developed one?”

I was asking myself when I was a kid. As many countries are growing fast, no one can deny that a quality education leads to a prosperous country, as well as excellent people. So, why quality education can transform a poor country into a rich country?

First, education is the biggest weapon you might have for your career path. My mother always reminds me that I am so lucky to have opportunities to study, which means I will be able to have a good occupation, a good social status life, or more chances to study aboard.
People in recent days hold education level in high regard. “We need the education to enable people to learn, think, and adapt.” - Justin Trudeau, the current prime minister of Canada once said, which shows us how the prime minister of Canada thinks about education. Due to this modern thinking, Canada has topped the rank with 56,27 percent of the population graduating from higher education. I am now living in a country that regards learning as an indispensable thing, so I am really into how people learn all over the world. I believe that the future of a country all depends on the high quality of education, which is provided not in schools, but also in your own family. This means education does not need to be from colleges or universities, it comes from how a family educates their children. A rich, well-educated family tends to bring up their children effectively but that does not mean a poor, uneducated one can not.
To include, high-quality education is what a country desires to improve people's cultural standards. Education is not only required when you want a high position in your work, but you also need to upgrade it through books and selected information. But we need to emphasize this: It is not necessary to pressure any students when learning, which is probably the most major thing in a good education system.