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Suuu201016 Posted 4 years ago
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The given bar chart demonstrates the amount of money being spent on goods by the British and French in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the largest amount of money is used to buy cars, whilst perfume registers the lowest figure among all products.
According to the graph, people in France and Britain spent the biggest share of their income on cars (400 000 pounds and over 450 000 pounds, respectively). Books attracted the vast majority of consumers in the UK with 400 000 pounds spent on them, while the number of money being used to purchase books by French was a little about 300 000 pounds. In terms of computers, the amount of money which is spent by the British was 300 000 pounds, whereas, people in France used slightly higher money than (over 350 000 pounds).
Likewise, the consumer in the UK used less money on perfume (just under 150 000 pounds), while the amount of money being spent by the French was 200 000 pounds. Conversely, the expenditure of shoppers in the UK on cameras was two times higher than the French' number with 350 000 and 150 000, respectively.

  

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suuu201016The given bar chart demonstrates

Do not use "given" or "provided." These are not natural.

"Demonstrate" is not a good verb choice. Read my advice.

suuu201016money being spent

The time frame is in the past. Do not use "being," which shows pres

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