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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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The sunset of dictators is described by the dawn of the wisdom of the oppressed in their country.

Please correct the sentence.

  

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anonymous Please correct the sentence. I can't because I don't know what you want to say. You seem to be trying to work in contrast with "sunset" and "dawn", but I don't think it works.

— Anonymous

  • anonymous Please correct the sentence.
  • I can't because I don't know what you want to say.
  • You seem to be trying to work in contrast with "sunset" and "dawn", but I don't think it works.
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anonymousPlease correct the sentence.

I can't because I don't know what you want to say. You seem to be trying to work in contrast with "sunset" and "dawn", but I don't think it works.

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