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Essay topics:Online advertising has been bringing massive profits for its providers.What should be the main problem that comes with online advertising?What would be done to address such a problem?In recent years, OA is an integral revenue for its providers. Beside several advantages, this phenomenon leads to undesirable problems. This essay demonstrates the problem and elicits a measure to tackleThe digital advertising have existed many problems. The noticeable issue is fraud. Providers have cheated with figures in order to increase their profit. Although display ads may not be seen by a human, automated algorithms still accounts these clickthrough. As the statistic, Google found 56% of ads aren't accessed by usersThis problem can be lessened by some measures. Firstly, ads industry have to set up a commission which will draft new regulations. With serious controllable and strict laws, providers may significantly limit cheating behaviors. Secondly, to tackle this problem, users should download ad fraud prevention tool. The app can distinguish genuine ad engagements from fraud. Users' platforms will not appear irrelevant contents.In conclusion, fraud is a negative problem of online advertising. So regulations and prevention tool should be taken sooner to prevent this issue from deteriorating further.

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Linh Ð? KhánhOnline advertising has been bringing massive profits for its providers. What ~~should be~~ is the main problem that comes with online advertising?
What should be done to address such a problem?

The topic is not phrased in native English. What are the rest of the instructions?

Is this an IELTS Task 2 essay?

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IELTS Task 2 essays have a minimum word count of 250. You wrote 170. This will reduce your score quite a bit.

In recent years, OA (Do not use acronyms without defining them first.) is an integral (wrong word) revenue for its providers. Beside several advantages, this ~~phenomenon~~ (wrong word) leads to undesirable problems. ~~This essay demonstrates the problem and elicits a measure to tackle~~

Do not mention your essay. Write a thesis statement. That is the main point of your essay.

E.g.

The main problem is fraudulent advertisements, and there are several means to eliminate them.

~~The~~ digital advertising have existed (wrong verb) many problems. The noticeable issue is fraud. Providers have cheated companies that pay for ads with figures (wrong word) in order to increase their profit. Although display ads may not be seen by a human, automated algorithms still accounts (wrong verb) these clickthrough. (Not a legitimate word.) As the statistic, (wrong word) Google found 56% of ads aren't accessed (wrong verb) by users (missing punctuation)

This problem can be lessened by some measures. First, ~~Firstly~~, the owners of websites or platforms which display ads ~~industry~~ have to set up a commission which will draft new regulations. With ~~serious controllable and~~ (wrong phrase. That does not make sense.) strict laws, providers may significantly limit cheating ~~behaviors~~. ~~Secondly~~, Second, to tackle this problem, users should download a ad fraudulent ad prevention tool. The app can distinguish genuine ads ~~engagements~~ from fraudulent ones. Users' platforms will not appear irrelevant contents.

(That makes no sense. Do you mean that the ads are filtered so they do not appear on the user's screen? That seems to be a second problem, not the main problem you identified.)

In conclusion, fraud is a ~~negative~~ problem of online advertising. So regulations and prevention tool should be taken sooner to prevent this ~~issue~~ problem from becoming more serious. ~~deteriorating further~~.

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