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Today the buses are crowded. When I got on a bus there were many people standing up on the bus. And so I pretended to sneeze. A girl near me stood up from her seat and ran away, fearing the coronavirus. Finally I could managed to get a seat.
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Today the buses were crowded. When I got on a bus there were many people standing up on the bus, and so I pretended to sneeze. A girl near me got up from her seat and ran to the other end of the bus , fearing the coronavirus.
- Today the buses were crowded.
- When I got on a bus there were many people standing up on the bus, and so I pretended to sneeze.
- A girl near me got up from her seat and ran to the other end of the bus , fearing the coronavirus.
- Finally I could managed to get a seat.
- If you don't understand any of my edits, please ask.
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Today the buses were crowded. When I got on a bus there were many people standing up on the bus, and so I pretended to sneeze. A girl near me got up from her seat and ran to the other end of the bus, fearing the coronavirus. Finally I could managed to get a seat.
If you don't understand any of my edits, please ask.
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