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When a stone is thrown towards the tree, it hits a bird and the bird falls onto the ground. The other birds fly away fearfully.

Please correct the sentence. Thanks in advance.

  

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When a stone is thrown towards the tree, it hits a bird and the bird falls onto to the ground. The other birds fly away fearfully. Please correct the sentence.

— Clive

  • When a stone is thrown towards the tree, it hits a bird and the bird falls onto to the ground.
  • The other birds fly away fearfully.
  • Please correct the sentence.
  • Thanks in advance.
  • When a stone is thrown towards the tree <<< , If possible, try to avoid the passive here.
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When a stone is thrown towards the tree, it hits a bird and the bird falls onto to the ground. The other birds fly away fearfully.

Please correct the sentence. Thanks in advance.


When a stone is thrown towards the tree <<< , If possible, try to avoid the passive here. The rest of your text is in active voice.

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