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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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There are many choices for beauty products such as make-ups, lip care, creams and countless others than in the past.

Please correct the sentence. Thanks in advance.

  

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anonymous There are now many more choices than ever before for beauty products such as make-ups, makeup, lip care, creams , and countless others . than in the past. As shown.

— CalifJim

  • anonymous There are now many more choices than ever before for beauty products such as make-ups, makeup, lip care, creams , and countless others .
  • than in the past.
  • As shown.
  • "lip care" is not a product, however, so you still need to fix that up.
  • Also, "and countless others" is weak after "such as".
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anonymousThere are now many more choices than ever before for beauty products such as make-ups, makeup, lip care, creams, and countless others
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