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Krishnendu S Posted 7 years ago
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It was a starry night. All set. The night sky, the moon ,the stars ,a mattress and of course me and my dad. The sky shone bright with its moon and diamonds. Me and my dad were lying on the mattress at our open terrace gazing at the alluring night sky. It felt as if the moon was wearing a beautiful gown with millions of diamonds in it and was much more angelic than ever. Me feeling my dad's warmth was lying on his shoulders( my usual place). I was always amazed and curious about the night sky and the stars.I believed that the stars belonged to me. They were mine. My dad pointed out three stars lying on a straight line and said that it was the hunters belt. I was kind of amazed on hearing the word constellation. He never told me about the rest of the constellation and I was eager to know ; to find the complete constellation.Years passed and even though I got busy with my stuffs I never forgot about the hunter. I still used to search for him.One fine night, after so many years I was lying on the same place all alone. Suddenly I found the complete constellation. I was so happy that I couldn't wait to tell my dad about this. As I told him about how I found the complete hunter by joining all the stars which belonged to that constellation and my curiosity broke off. But he drove me into something inquisitive when he told about the cosmic. Something cosmic!.
  

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Krishnendu S the moon ,the stars ,a mattress You have made a lot of spacing errors in your essay. Put a single space after a punctuation mark. Do not put a space before a punctuation mark.

  • Krishnendu S the moon ,the stars ,a mattress You have made a lot of spacing errors in your essay.
  • Put a single space after a punctuation mark.
  • Do not put a space before a punctuation mark.
  • Please fix all these errors and repost the writing.
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Krishnendu Sthe moon ,the stars ,a mattress

You have made a lot of spacing errors in your essay. Put a single space after a punctuation mark. Do not put a space before a punctuation mark.

Please fix all these errors and repost the writing.

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