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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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These things are made of china. So, they clean easily.

Please correct the sentences.

  

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What you have written is OK, but starting a new sentence at "So" creates a slightly staccato feel. You may prefer this: These things are made of china, so they clean easily. I would say that this intransitive use of "clean" has a colloquial feel.

  • What you have written is OK, but starting a new sentence at "So" creates a slightly staccato feel.
  • You may prefer this: These things are made of china, so they clean easily.
  • I would say that this intransitive use of "clean" has a colloquial feel.
  • In formal writing I would go for: These things are made of china, so they are easy to clean.
  • However, it does not feel like a super-formal sentence, so your version is most likely OK.
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What you have written is OK, but starting a new sentence at "So" creates a slightly staccato feel. You may prefer this:

These things are made of china, so they clean easily.

I would say that this intransitive use of "clean" has a colloquial feel. In formal writing I would go for:

These things are made of china, so they are easy to clean.

However, it does n

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