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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Hi is this grammatically correct?

In The Ghazi Attack, after his teammate died and another one is dismissed, a Lieutenant Commander decided to ask for transfer he is needed for one last mission that would change his world forever.

  

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anonymous Hi is this grammatically correct? Not really. I have trouble understanding it.

  • anonymous Hi is this grammatically correct?
  • Not really.
  • I have trouble understanding it.
  • I have tried my best to make it natural In t he Ghazi Attack, after one of his teammates died and another one was is dismissed, a l ieutenant c ommander decided to ask for a transfer .
  • H e was needed for one last mission and that would change his world forever.
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anonymousHi is this grammatically correct?

Not really. I have trouble understanding it. I have tried my best to make it natural

In the Ghazi Attack, after one of his teammates died and another one was is dismissed, a lieutenant commander decided to ask for a tran

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Thank you. Can i say like this:

After one of his teammate died and another one was dismissed, a lieutenant commander decides to ask for transfer he is needed for one last mission that would change his world forever.

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