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When a mobster, Marco, takes the total control of the Djaro underground organization from Hair, his very own boss, next he sets out to hit Hair’s adopted son Nash. But, Nash has anticipated this, escaping the petty thugs and immediately makes his way to Indonesia; With the purpose of finding the elusive Arman, the only one capable to stop Marco, and his underground crimes. Upon his arrival to Indonesia, he meets Ella, Arman’s daughter.
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anonymous When After, a mobster, Marco, takes the total control of the Djaro underground organization from Hair, his very own boss, next he sets out to hit Hair’s adopted so n, Nash. Bu t N ash has anticipated this, escaping and he manages to evade the petty thugs sent after him and immediately makes his way to Indones ia, w ith the purpose of finding the elusive Arman, the only one capable to of sto pping Marc o a nd his criminal activities. underground crimes.
- anonymous When After, a mobster, Marco, takes the total control of the Djaro underground organization from Hair, his very own boss, next he sets out to hit Hair’s adopted so n, Nash.
- Bu t N ash has anticipated this, escaping and he manages to evade the petty thugs sent after him and immediately makes his way to Indones ia, w ith the purpose of finding the elusive Arman, the only one capable to of sto pping Marc o a nd his criminal activities.
- underground crimes.
- Upon his arrival to Indonesia, he meets Ella, Arman’s daughter.
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anonymousWhenAfter, a mobster, Marco, takesthetotal control of the Djaro underground organization from Hair, his very own boss,nexthe sets out to hit Hair’s adopted son, Nash. But Nash has anticipated this,
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