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Hi, if possible could you please check the following sentence?
A loving grandfather Chungen is excited to reunite with both his daughter and granddaughter after several years. However, things soon take a turn for the worse when Chungen suffers from dementia.
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It doesn't make sense to say "a loving grandfather" at the beginning when you then refer to his daughter. He is her father. A loving patriarch, Chungen is excited...
- It doesn't make sense to say "a loving grandfather" at the beginning when you then refer to his daughter.
- He is her father.
- A loving patriarch, Chungen is excited...
- A loving elder, Chungen...
- A loving father and grandfather, Chungen is ...
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It doesn't make sense to say "a loving grandfather" at the beginning when you then refer to his daughter. He is her father.
A loving patriarch, Chungen is excited...
A loving elder, Chungen...
A loving father and grandfather, Chungen is ...
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