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The advantages of Technology
Nowadays, technology is being significantly developed and it brings so many advantages to human. In modern life, everything is really optimized by applying information technology to deal with daily tasks. Thanks to the digital revolution, it has fundamentally changed the way that people work, communicate, behave and even think; moreover, technology affects on many fields sharply in our lives is unmeasurable. Today, more and more people use modern technology because of several advantages. For instance, email is such a tool for communication between employees in different offices or different countries; in addition, we can see and discuss with people in diffrenent locations by using the Internet. In the worlds of business or education, video conferencing has enabled people to exchange ideas without travelling across the world; moreover, distance learning in education such as School in the Cloud has been made possible by online, etc. According to the writer- Joseph Krutch, "Technology made large populations possible; large populations now make technology indispensable" Indeed, technology brings lots of benefits to people.


  
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