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Moblie phones has become popular to everybody and very convinent. The first advantage of having a moblie phone which we can look clearly is communicated with my family, friends and co-worker no matter where you are. You can call your parents if you are boring or simply you are very missing their. Nowaday, the more development of technology, many companies use mobile phone is a part of the jobs. Staffs can make schedule of working, exchange, discuss about the career through a appstore which depend on other company. In addition, mobile phone as a element to relax for people. We can play game or listen to music in the free time. Morever, if you have a smartphone you can access to the Internet to watch film, check profile in facebook and update a picture wherever you are.
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Your text has many problems. 1. Check the spelling of your words.
- Your text has many problems.
- 1.
- Check the spelling of your words.
- 2.
- Make sure that you use plurals correctly.
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Your text has many problems.
1. Check the spelling of your words.
2. Make sure that you use plurals correctly. (One co-worker, many co-workers)
3. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject.
4. Check the sentence structure.
5. Make sure the words are used correctly in the sentence.
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