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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 9 years ago
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Today is my birthday and one year closer to death. Everyone should ever take this in mind and do more good deeds in the rest of life.
Please correct my sentences.
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You sound like a very old man. Lighten up! Today is my birthday , and I am one year closer to death.
- You sound like a very old man.
- Lighten up!
- Today is my birthday , and I am one year closer to death.
- Everyone should always keep that in mind and do more good deeds for the rest of their lives
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You sound like a very old man. Lighten up!
Today is my birthday, and I am one year closer to death. Everyone should always keep that in mind and do more good deeds for the rest of their lives
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