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Grape mango 620 Posted 9 years ago
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"In brief,choosing where is better to live is up to personal view of everyone since everything has both dark sides and brght ones. But in my mind, i prefer to living in the countryside. Its friendly environment is good for my health."

Is it a good conclusion? The topic is" It is thought by some that it is better to love in a city while other people believe that life is better in the countryside.""

  

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First, fix the mistakes highlighted below. In brie f,c hoosing where it is better to live is up to (missing word) personal view of everyone since everything has both dark sides and brght ones. But in my mind, i prefer to living in the countryside.

  • First, fix the mistakes highlighted below.
  • In brie f,c hoosing where it is better to live is up to (missing word) personal view of everyone since everything has both dark sides and brght ones.
  • But in my mind, i prefer to living in the countryside.
  • Its friendly environment is good for my health.
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First, fix the mistakes highlighted below.


In brief,choosing where it is better to live is up to (missing word) personal view of everyone since everything has both dark sides and brght ones. But in my mind, i prefer

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