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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

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He and his mother were dreamers. They would sit on a beach and be lost in their dreams.
Please correct my writing. Thanks in advance.
  

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Do you just want grammar correction, or do you also want to know how to say this in more natural English?
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Fiirst, grammar correction and then I'd like to know more natural English about this. Thanks.
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No grammar errors.

Natural is
eg He and his mother were dreamers. They often sat on a beach, lost in their dreams.

If you don't mean a specific beach, say 'the beach'.

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