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1. An old dentist, Mr Chen, he is sixty years old but still physically fit and full of charisma. He wants to be able to experience the vitality of a burning passion for one last once.
2. The trouble begins when aging dentist Mr. Chen tires of merely eyeing the sweet things at the local swimming pool and takes up with his granddaughter’s much-younger teacher. His poor daughter Hsiao-chi is crushed by the news, for she always envied her parents’ union. Her brother Sze-ming is too busy with his own family and struggling business to care. His tune changes when he learns that his mother, not content to stay home and grieve, falls in love with a wealthy Hong Kong gigolo.
1. An old dentist, Mr Chen, he is sixty years old but still physically fit and full of charisma. He wants to be able to experience the vitality of a burning passion for one last once.
2. The trouble begins when aging dentist Mr. Chen tires of merely eyeing the sweet things at the local swimming pool and takes up with his granddaughter’s much-younger teacher. His poor daughter Hsiao-chi is crushed by the news, for she always envied her parents’ union. Her brother Sze-ming is too busy with his own family and struggling business to care. His tune changes when he learns that his mother, not content to stay home and grieve, falls in love with a wealthy Hong Kong gigolo.
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1. An old dentist, Mr Chen, he is sixty years old but still physically fit and full of charisma. He wants to be able to experience the vitality of a burning passion for one last time.
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- An old dentist, Mr Chen, he is sixty years old but still physically fit and full of charisma.
- He wants to be able to experience the vitality of a burning passion for one last time.
- once.
- 2.
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1. An old dentist, Mr Chen, he is sixty years old but still physically fit and full of charisma. He wants to be able to experience the vitality of a burning passion for one last time. once.
2. The trouble begins when aging dentist Mr. Chen tires of merely eyeing the sweet things at the local swimming pool and takes up with his granddaughter’s much-younger teac
2. The trouble begins when aging dentist Mr. Chen tires of merely eyeing the sweet things at the local swimming pool and takes up with his granddaughter’s much-younger teac
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