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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, could you please check this sentence?

Nobita and the gang's escapade through time to establish the home of their own, however, they instead have to help a cave boy whose tribe has been attacked and kidnapped by a monster.
  

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If I understand this correctly, you meant to say, "Nobita and the gang's escape through time to establish a home of their own. However, they are not able to do this because they have to help a cave boy, whose tribe has been attacked and kidnapped by a monster.

  • If I understand this correctly, you meant to say, "Nobita and the gang's escape through time to establish a home of their own.
  • However, they are not able to do this because they have to help a cave boy, whose tribe has been attacked and kidnapped by a monster.
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If I understand this correctly, you meant to say, "Nobita and the gang's escape through time to establish a home of their own. However, they are not able to do this because they have to help a cave boy, whose tribe has been attacked and kidnapped by a monster.
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This sounds more clear to me. Thank you.

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