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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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The sounds of the strong wind blowing in the big trees and giant bamboo plants were violent.
Is my sentence meaningful and natural? Please correct the sentence. Thanks in advance.
  

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Anonymous Is my sentence meaningful Yes. Anonymous and natural? No.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous Is my sentence meaningful Yes.
  • Anonymous and natural?
  • No.
  • The sound of the strong wind in the tall trees and giant bamboos was violent.
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AnonymousIs my sentence meaningful
Yes.
Anonymousand natural?
No.

The sound of the strong wind in the tall trees and giant bamboos was violent.
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It's rather clunky. Consider saying something like "The wind howled through the trees and the giant bamboo plants."

(Cross-posted.)
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