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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Amidst many women's whine about extramarital affairs, Arini has never worried that her husband, Pras, will cheat on her - especially after they bear a daughter. The ultimate trust, however, is shattered when she starts noticing clues of his extramarital marriage with a woman whom he has no choice but to marry.
Amidst many women's whine about extramarital affairs, Arini has never worried that her husband, Pras, will cheat on her - especially after they bear a daughter. The ultimate trust, however, is shattered when she starts noticing clues of his extramarital marriage with a woman whom he has no choice but to marry.
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Please explain, and then we can edit your text. What's an extra-marital marriage? Do these people live in a country where a man can have more than one wife?
- Please explain, and then we can edit your text.
- What's an extra-marital marriage?
- Do these people live in a country where a man can have more than one wife?
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Please explain, and then we can edit your text.
What's an extra-marital marriage?
Do these people live in a country where a man can have more than one wife?
What's an extra-marital marriage?
Do these people live in a country where a man can have more than one wife?
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Amidst many women's whining about extramarital affairs, Arini has never worried that her husband, Pras, will cheat on her - especially after she bears hm a daughter. The ultimate trust, however, is shattered when she starts noticing clues of his affair.
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Let me add a comment about 'whining'. In this context, it is an offensive word which implies that women should not complain about husbands who have affairs.
A more suitable word is 'complaining'.
Clive
A more suitable word is 'complaining'.
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