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I would use into instead of to. I must add that the sentence seems a bit odd to me: perhaps the first verb form should be simply agreed.

Thank you sir. How about this:

Four teenagers, who grow up together but part ways in high school, agree for a mini reunion when they are 20-years-old. When the day comes, circumstances have changed what is meant to be a fun, relaxing sojourn into a life-menacing terror.

To this American ear, sojourn seems to jar. (No hyphens in 20 years old) (agree to or on)

PhilipTo this American ear, sojourn seems to jar.

That's also the case from a non-American view.

Another point worth making is that if they are 20 years old, they are not teenagers. The text should be rewritten to take this into account.

AnonymousAnother point worth making is that if they are 20 years old, they are not teenagers. The text should be rewritten to take this into account.

I think the guys were teens when they made the agreement (in high school).

PhilipTo this American ear, sojourn seems to jar.

It's a very rare word. It would be better to replace it with something more common and natural.

Thank you all for the feedback. How about this:

Four friends, who grow up together but part ways in high school, agree for a mini reunion when they are 20-years-old. When the day comes, circumstances have changed what is meant to be a fun, relaxing stay into a life-menacing terror.

Lots of problems.

Four friends who grew up together but parted ways in high school arrange a reunion (for?) when they are 20 years old. When the day comes, circumstances have changed, and what was meant to be a fun, relaxing stay turns into a life-threatening terror.

Use 'for' if they arranged the reunion before they were 20; omit it if they arranged the reunion when they

I will improvise my mistakes, sir. Thank you. Just to clarify with you, is this sentence into past tense?