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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 10 years ago
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In 1974, the new policy adopted by WHO was to develop the traditional forms of medicine of developing countries.
Please correct the sentence.
Please correct the sentence.
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I would use 'in' instead of 'of' before 'developing', but yours is OK.
- I would use 'in' instead of 'of' before 'developing', but yours is OK.
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I would use 'in' instead of 'of' before 'developing', but yours is OK.
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It is not wrong, but to me it kind of suggests that the medicines were to be taken from the countries and developed internationally for potential international use. I wonder if that is actually what's meant. Perhaps this would be better:
In 1974, the new policy adopted by WHO was to develop traditional forms of medicine in developing countries.
The "develop ... deve
In 1974, the new policy adopted by WHO was to develop traditional forms of medicine in developing countries.
The "develop ... deve
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