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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 11 years ago
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When we pick up, string and create seashells with inspiration, they become souvenirs.
Please correct the sentence. Thanks in advance.
  

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Thein Lwin 7291When we pick up, string and create seashells with inspiration, they become souvenirs.
Delete the comma after 'pick up'

(later) I was mistaken - see Clive's post below. Sorry.
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I think a word like "decorate" would work better in that sentence instead of "create."
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Thein Lwin 7291create seashells
I thought that only sea creatures created seashells.

Do you mean you create jewelry out of seashells that you find?
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Delete the comma after 'pick up'

I see string is a verb here, not a noun.
ie we pick up, we string and we decorate , , ,

Clive
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CliveI see string is a verb here, not a noun.
You are right; I was wrong. I have added a note to my post. Thanks.
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AlpheccaStars Thein Lwin 7291create seashellsI thought that only sea creatures created seashells.Do you mean you create jewelry out of seashells that you find?
Yes, I mean as you think.
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