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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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Could someone help me with these sentences? If I made any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thanks in advance.
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A true story, Boonpeng, a killer is convicted and sentenced to death and beheaded when he kills wealthy widows for himself and dumps their bodies in the canal.
Plot
A true story about Boonpeng who uses his charm and magic to lure wealthy widows to have affairs with him before killing them and dumping their bodies in the canal.
Plot
A true story, Boonpeng, a killer is convicted and sentenced to death and beheaded when he kills wealthy widows for himself and dumps their bodies in the canal.
Plot
A true story about Boonpeng who uses his charm and magic to lure wealthy widows to have affairs with him before killing them and dumping their bodies in the canal.
Top answer
) killing wealthy widows for himself and dumps their bodies in a canal. (Do you need "convicted"? " would be right if you wanted to explain the crime which meant that he was beheaded.
- ) killing wealthy widows for himself and dumps their bodies in a canal.
- (Do you need "convicted"?
- " would be right if you wanted to explain the crime which meant that he was beheaded.
- Plot A true story about Boonpeng, who uses his charm and magic to lure wealthy widows in to hav ing e affairs with him, before killing them and dumping their bodies in a canal.
- Check my commas too.
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Plot
In this true story, Boonpeng - a killer - is convicted,and sentenced to death, and beheaded after (for?) killing wealthy widows for himself and dumps their bodies in a canal.
(Do you need "convicted"? Sentenced to death implies a prior conviction.)
"for killing...."
would be right if you wanted to explain the crime which meant that he
In this true story, Boonpeng - a killer - is convicted,
(Do you need "convicted"? Sentenced to death implies a prior conviction.)
"for killing...."
would be right if you wanted to explain the crime which meant that he
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