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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 11 years ago
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You can take physical exercise in this gym as well as try to lose weight
Please correct the sentence. Thanks a lot.
  

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You can exercise in this gym as well as try to lose weight.

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You can exercise in this gym as well as try to lose weight.
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Dear Mister Micawber,
Thank you very much for your quick reply.
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Thein Lwin 7291 You can take physical exercise in this gym as well as try to lose weightPlease correct the sentence. Thanks a lot.
Your wording is a bit wordy and awkward. Mister Micawber's suggestion is more natural.
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Anonymous Thein Lwin 7291 You can take physical exercise in this gym as well as try to lose weightPlease correct the sentence. Thanks a lot.Your wording is a bit wordy and awkward. Mister Micawber's suggestion is more natural.
I appreciate your remark. But you are the follower.
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