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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 11 years ago
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At one night of the festival in my youth, an open top jeep halted just right in front of the small pandal.
Please correct the sentence. Thanks a lot.
  

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I suggest: During one night...

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I suggest: During one night...
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PhilipI suggest: During one night...
If I continue to write the sentence like the following:There was a group of youths in it. Is this okay? Thanks again.
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Thein Lwin 7291At one night of the festival
You have not mentioned which festival. If you don't, it won't make sense.
Thein Lwin 7291an open top jeep halted just right in front of the small pandal.
an open top jeep halted just in front of the small pandal.
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AnonymousThein Lwin 7291an open top jeep halted just right in front of the small pandal.an open top jeep halted just in front of the small pandal.
Right in front is widely accepted in the U.S.
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PhilipRight in front is widely accepted in the U.S.
That may be so but, considering that the word just was used before the word right, right is superfluous.
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Anonymous Thein Lwin 7291At one night of the festivalYou have not mentioned which festival. If you don't, it won't make sense.Thein Lwin 7291an open top jeep halted just right in front of the small pandal.an open top jeep halted just in front of the small pandal.
Yes. I haven't mentioned what festival because yoi don't need to know what festival. Thank you.
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Thein Lwin 7291Yes. I haven't mentioned what festival because yoi don't need to know what festival. Thank you.
Even if you don't mention in this discussion, which festival you are referring to; you should mention it before your suggested text, so that whoever you intend to communicate this to, will know.

If you intend your text to be read by someone o
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Anonymous PhilipRight in front is widely accepted in the U.S.That may be so but, considering that the word just was used before the word right, right is superfluous.
You're right, sorry! I missed the redundancy. Thanks for good sighting on your part.
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