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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
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Some people think that money spent on advertising is money well spent. It assists a rapid distribution of goods at resonable prices and draws attention to new ideas.
Are these two sentences relevant points? If not, how should I rewrite? Thanks in advance.
  

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thein lwin Some people think that money spent on advertising is money well spent. Are these two sentences relevant points? If not, how should I rewrite?

  • thein lwin Some people think that money spent on advertising is money well spent.
  • Are these two sentences relevant points?
  • If not, how should I rewrite?
  • Thanks in advance.
  • In the above sentences, if I leave out 'Some people think that', I think the two sentences are more relevant.
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thein lwin Some people think that money spent on advertising is money well spent. It assists a rapid distribution of goods at resonable prices and draws attention to new ideas.Are these two sentences relevant points? If not, how should I rewrite? Thanks in advance.
In the above sentences, if I leave out 'Some people think that', I think the two sentences are
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thein lwin: Thein Lwin 7291

Why are you writing from two accounts?
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fivejedjonthein lwin: Thein Lwin 7291 Why are you writing from two accounts?
This is an error with you. I think I have only one account. You can cancle one account or both.

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