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Anonymous Dear Members, please check my sentence and correct it if necessary. Thanks in advance.No matter how you keep precepts or make donations, it is uncivilization without putting empathy on others.

I suggest you:
Prayers, charity - you take on endless practices but with your lack of empathy with others, how ignorant are you!

Anon, I don't understand what you are trying to say (although I think I have a rough idea), so it's hard to help without greater clarity.

I do recommend that you avoid paying attention to 'thein lwin's' response, which is totally ungrammatical and does not seem to come from a native English speaker.

Xerxes Anon, I don't understand what you are trying to say (although I think I have a rough idea), so it's hard to help without greater clarity.I do recommend that you avoid paying attention to 'thein lwin's' response, which is totally ungrammatical and does not seem to come from a native English speaker.

I'm not a native speaker.Please correct my sentence if

Dear Xerxs, thank you so much for recommending me to avoid paying `thein lwin´ response. `thein lwin´ shouldn't make response unless he knows much about English.

AnonymousDear Xerxs, thank you so much for recommending me to avoid paying `thein lwin´ response. `thein lwin´ shouldn't make response unless he knows much about English.

I expect your polite discussion.Anyways thanks for your tribute to the discussion.