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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
Business & Finance
writing
Please correct the sentence.
What kind of girls would plump girls with rosy round faces love to be?
And I'd like to know how I can rewrite it in another way. Thanks in advance.
What kind of girls would plump girls with rosy round faces love to be?
And I'd like to know how I can rewrite it in another way. Thanks in advance.
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” Although there was nothing grammatically wrong with the original sentence, it would take a couple of readings before it would be understood. This is partly due to the word ‘plump’ which might, at first, be read as if it were a verb.
- ” Although there was nothing grammatically wrong with the original sentence, it would take a couple of readings before it would be understood.
- This is partly due to the word ‘plump’ which might, at first, be read as if it were a verb.
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“If plump girls with rosy, round faces could change, what would they love to be?”
Although there was nothing grammatically wrong with the original sentence, it would take a couple of readings before it would be understood. This is partly due to the word ‘plump’ which might, at first, be read as if it were a verb.
Although there was nothing grammatically wrong with the original sentence, it would take a couple of readings before it would be understood. This is partly due to the word ‘plump’ which might, at first, be read as if it were a verb.
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