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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
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He was given, by his father, a laptop which he had longed for.
Please correct the sentence.Thanks in advance.
Please correct the sentence.Thanks in advance.
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It's not incorrect. Other ways to say it are eg He was given a laptop which he had longed for, by his father. eg His father gave him a laptop which he had longed for.
- It's not incorrect.
- Other ways to say it are eg He was given a laptop which he had longed for, by his father.
- eg His father gave him a laptop which he had longed for.
- Clive .
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It's not incorrect.
Other ways to say it are
eg He was given a laptop which he had longed for, by his father.
eg His father gave him a laptop which he had longed for.
Clive.
Other ways to say it are
eg He was given a laptop which he had longed for, by his father.
eg His father gave him a laptop which he had longed for.
Clive.
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thein lwinHe was given, by his father, a laptop which he had longed for.It's OK. I'd say His father gave him a laptop that he'd been wanting for some time.
CJ
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