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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

writing

1.After the ink having dried up, I would write.
2.After working long hours in the cold, his hands were sore and cracked.
Please check the sentences.Thanks a lot.
  

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After the ink having dried up, I would write. I'm afraid this doesn't make sense to me. After working long hours in the cold, his hands were sore and cracked.

— Blue Jay

  • After the ink having dried up, I would write.
  • I'm afraid this doesn't make sense to me.
  • After working long hours in the cold, his hands were sore and cracked.
  • This sentence is fine.
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Anonymous1.After the ink having dried up, I would write.
I'm afraid this doesn't make sense to me.
Anonymous2.After working long hours in the cold, his hands were sore and cracked.
This sentence is fine.
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Blue Jay Anonymous1.After the ink having dried up, I would write.I'm afraid this doesn't make sense to me.Anonymous2.After working long hours in the cold, his hands were sore and cracked.This sentence is fine.
I'm sorry.The sentence is:After the ink having dried up, I would not write.Please correct the sentence.
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thein lwinAfter the ink having dried up, I would not write.
No, that won't work. You could say:
After the ink dried up, I would not write.
Once the ink dried up, I would not write.
When the ink dried up, I would not write.
(I would change I would not write to I would no longer write
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