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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
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Six weeks after the foolish cartman had gone trading, he set off from the city with his five hundred carts.
Please correct the sentence.Thanks a lot.
  

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It is grammatically correct English, and there is no obvious unique way to correct it, if indeed it needs correction. I'm wondering whether "gone trading" is the best way of expressing what you mean, but really it is impossible to say anything definite without more information about the context and what you are trying to say. "cartman" is an unusual word.

  • It is grammatically correct English, and there is no obvious unique way to correct it, if indeed it needs correction.
  • I'm wondering whether "gone trading" is the best way of expressing what you mean, but really it is impossible to say anything definite without more information about the context and what you are trying to say.
  • "cartman" is an unusual word.
  • Would someone feasibly set out with 500 carts?
  • It seems an awful lot.
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It is grammatically correct English, and there is no obvious unique way to correct it, if indeed it needs correction. I'm wondering whether "gone trading" is the best way of expressing what you mean, but really it is impossible to say anything definite without more information about the context and what you are trying to say. "cartman" is an unusual word.

Would someone feasibly set out wi

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