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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
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Gods cannot fulfill all desires of man.
Is my sentence correct?Please check it.Thanks a lot.
  

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Some may object to the plurality of gods and the male orientation of 'man', but the sentence is correctly formed.

— Philip

  • Some may object to the plurality of gods and the male orientation of 'man', but the sentence is correctly formed.
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Some may object to the plurality of gods and the male orientation of 'man', but the sentence is correctly formed.
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thein lwinIs my sentence correct?
It's grammatical, but I'd add 'the' before desires. Plus, there are several other ways to say that.

Gods cannot fulfill all the desires of [man / mankind].
Gods cannot fulfill all of [man's / mankind's] desires.

CJ
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