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Hi.

I'm looking for someone who could check my short essay, e.g. about the schools in my country. It's simple essay, because my english is not very good. It's very important for me, because i'll take an exam in June. That's why i have to improve my writing skills.
If you've got time and you would like to help me, just let me know.
I'll be extremely grateful.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Post it here and someone may volunteer to check it.

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I've decided to write my essay here. If someone has noticed any mistakes or if i could write it in diffrent right way, please write a correct version of this words/sentences. All advices will be very helpful for me. Thank you in advance!

Exercise: A day at school
Describe a normal school day in the life of a student in your country including hours, class subjects, meals, rules, dress, and extra-curricular activities.

A normal school day in Poland probably looks the same like at schools in others countries. The students spend from 6 to 7 hours to learning the basic subjects. In a high school you can choose two or three subjects that you will learn on higher level. In the end the education the students take an Matura Exam that decide about their future.
Every lesson is 45 minutes long. Between the lessons is 5-15 minutes break. During the break the students can go to a shop and buy a meal or order something to eat in a canteen.
There is few simple rules at school: don't cheat in an exam, don't play turant and always do your homework. If you do it, you never get any problems. At polish school you don't need to wear the uniforms, but you always must change your schoes.
The students sometimes go to a cinema or a theatre instead the lessons. Every year in spring time the students have got a trip to others cities, even to other countries.
Our summer holiday starts at the end of June and all the students come back in September.

Clive · Answer

Exercise: A day at school
Describe a normal school day in the life of a student in your country including hours, class subjects, meals, rules, dress, and extra-curricular activities.

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A normal school day in Poland probably looks the same as one for schools in other countries. The students spend from 6 to 7 hours learning the basic subjects. In a high school you can choose two or three subjects that you will learn at a higher level. At thee end, the students take a Matura Exam that decides their future.
Every lesson is 45 minutes long. Between the lessons is a 5-15 minutes break. During the break the students can go to a shop and buy a meal or order something to eat in a canteen.
There are a few simple rules at school: do not cheat in an exam, do not play truant, and always do your homework. If you follow these rules, you never have any problems. At a Polish school you do not need to wear a uniform, but you must always must change your shoes.
The students sometimes go to a cinema or a theatre instead of to lessons. Every year in the spring, they have a trip to another city or even to another country.
The summer holiday starts at the end of June and all the students come back in September.

Anonymous · Answer

I understand everything. You're very helpful. Thank you very much!

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