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Cocoa Posted 13 years ago
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Could you please check my writing for me? Thanks a lot.
"I couldn't explain my feeling after I got the paper. Are 4 years of a lot of efforts I put into worth only a piece of paper and that day? I believe it doesn't mean everything in my life or can really prove that I am better than some of my friends. Some of the honor students, I think, would have the same idea. Anyway, my parents showed a proud of me when seeing the paper."
"I couldn't explain my feeling after I got the paper. Are 4 years of a lot of efforts I put into worth only a piece of paper and that day? I believe it doesn't mean everything in my life or can really prove that I am better than some of my friends. Some of the honor students, I think, would have the same idea. Anyway, my parents showed a proud of me when seeing the paper."
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