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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Please the following sentences.

(1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.

(2) Whe thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.

(3) She read the notice for lost Lucky in the bulletin board this morning, so she was going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.
  

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I have undelined some problems. The dog's name should be struck from the first sentence because she didn't know it had one. (1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.

  • I have undelined some problems.
  • The dog's name should be struck from the first sentence because she didn't know it had one.
  • (1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.
  • (2) Whe thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.
  • (3) She read the notice for lost Lucky in the bulletin board this morning, so she was going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.
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I have undelined some problems. The dog's name should be struck from the first sentence because she didn't know it had one.

(1) The woman found the dog Lucky in the park by chance three days ago.
(2) Whe thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.
(3) She read the notice for lost Lucky in the bulletin board this morning, so she
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I correct the above sentences as following. Are they better?

#1 The woman found the dog in the park by chance three days ago.

#2 She thought it was a stray dog, so she kept it as a pet.

#3 She read the notice on the bulletin board thisw morning, so she was going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.
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#3 She read the notice about him on the bulletin board thisw morning, so she is going to return the puppy to its rightful owner.
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What is him referring to? The puppy?

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