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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Please check the following sentences.
(1) Amy was sure that it was her lost Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
(2) So she shouted loud "Lucky! Lucky!"
(3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy friendly.
(4) While Amy crouched down to fondle Lucky, she argued with the woman it was her pet dog.
(1) Amy was sure that it was her lost Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
(2) So she shouted loud "Lucky! Lucky!"
(3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy friendly.
(4) While Amy crouched down to fondle Lucky, she argued with the woman it was her pet dog.
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I would make a few small changes to clarify the sentences (changes are in boldface): (1) Amy was sure that it was her lost dog Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye. (2) So she shouted loud ly, "Lucky! " (3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy in a friendly way .
- I would make a few small changes to clarify the sentences (changes are in boldface): (1) Amy was sure that it was her lost dog Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
- (2) So she shouted loud ly, "Lucky!
- " (3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy in a friendly way .
- (4) While Amy crouched down to fondle Lucky, she argued with the woman that it was her pet dog.
- Hope this helps.
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I would make a few small changes to clarify the sentences (changes are in boldface):
(1) Amy was sure that it was her lost dog Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
(2) So she shouted loudly, "Lucky! Lucky!"
(3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy in a friendly wa
(1) Amy was sure that it was her lost dog Lucky because it had a conspicious dark spot on its right eye.
(2) So she shouted loudly, "Lucky! Lucky!"
(3) The dog seemed to recognize its proper owner, so it wagged its tail joyfully and barked at Amy in a friendly wa
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