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Mariott Posted 16 years ago
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"We will give you a price 10% lower than a price to other customers."
I guess this sentence is very awkward. Would anyone help me with this please?
I guess this sentence is very awkward. Would anyone help me with this please?
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Yes, it is awkward, Mariott. "
- Yes, it is awkward, Mariott.
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Yes, it is awkward, Mariott. Here are a couple of suggestions:
"We will give you a price (that is) 10% lower than what we give other customers."
"Your price will be 10% lower than the price we give other customers."
"We will give you a price (that is) 10% lower than what we give other customers."
"Your price will be 10% lower than the price we give other customers."
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