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00 I came across to find out this website from google.com and want to improve my writing skill. Would anyone please to review my essay and give me suggestions? 02 br
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00 I sincerely appreciate any commentary. 01 h2
00 The constitution of a society often requires different kinds of people to make contribution in variant ways. Therefore, it is not enough simply to expect elites to offer their ability obtained from school. Thus, I agree with the point that those properties a society needs can not be learned in university as well as other institution. 02 br
00 The primary reason is that nowadays many universities more often train students with physical skills rather than help them think logically. As we are often able to perceive that every year lots of enterprises complain about incapability of graduated students. For instance, many professors would teach students to use denominated software such as Microsoft Office, rather than lecturing the principles of the editor. Thus, it only comes up with students who do not know how to solve dilemmas. 02 br
00 Second, the properties that a community desires usually results from creativity, notably in such swiftly changing society. Different eras require contribution from people capable of feasible properties. In the past few decades in Taiwan, abilities of work force needed was diligent and earnest. However, up to the present days, the higher technology a society be, the more sophisticated personality, such as creativity as well as thinking deliberately, weigh over physical skills. Accordingly, that would be a critical point for a country or a society to develop rapidly. 02 br
00 To sum up, not merely by training people with ossified skills, including usage of tools, but also helping them have rumination as well, it would fulfill the requirement of a society needed accordingly. 0-
00 I came across to find out this website from google.com and want to improve my writing skill. Would anyone please to review my essay and give me suggestions? 02 br
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00 I sincerely appreciate any commentary. 01 h2
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00 Subject: Qualities of people that we need in our society can't be learned in universities and other academic institutions. Do you agree or disagree? 02 br00 The constitution of a society often requires different kinds of people to make contribution in variant ways. Therefore, it is not enough simply to expect elites to offer their ability obtained from school. Thus, I agree with the point that those properties a society needs can not be learned in university as well as other institution. 02 br
00 The primary reason is that nowadays many universities more often train students with physical skills rather than help them think logically. As we are often able to perceive that every year lots of enterprises complain about incapability of graduated students. For instance, many professors would teach students to use denominated software such as Microsoft Office, rather than lecturing the principles of the editor. Thus, it only comes up with students who do not know how to solve dilemmas. 02 br
00 Second, the properties that a community desires usually results from creativity, notably in such swiftly changing society. Different eras require contribution from people capable of feasible properties. In the past few decades in Taiwan, abilities of work force needed was diligent and earnest. However, up to the present days, the higher technology a society be, the more sophisticated personality, such as creativity as well as thinking deliberately, weigh over physical skills. Accordingly, that would be a critical point for a country or a society to develop rapidly. 02 br
00 To sum up, not merely by training people with ossified skills, including usage of tools, but also helping them have rumination as well, it would fulfill the requirement of a society needed accordingly. 0-
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